Screen buddies

The latest activity in my course workbook is to write a sonnet, using a previous draft as a basis.  Never one to follow rules I've decided to start from scratch - if I'd wanted to write any of the others as a sonnet I would have done so at the time! 

Apparently nowadays you don't have to stick to strict iambic pentameters, and it's OK to use half or slant rhymes. All of which makes it easier to do,  but somehow harder to come up with something of substance.  

Anyway, I've been spending far too much time scrolling on my phone lately,  so that's the subject I've come up with. 

Screen buddies

It's easy these days, to sit and waste the time
You could be spending better.  Too easy to scroll
Through lives being lived by others, so fine
And dandy in their onscreen world, it's all
So perfect, all smiles and laughter. Have no doubt
About what they're doing. It's one big sell
To make you like, or buy, or share. It's about
Selling a lifestyle, and they do it well. 
You think they're your friends, but they are not, 
They're after your clicks, your cash, your time.
Don't get drawn in, comments are not chummy chat, 
They're paid by results, to spin you a line. 
    Put down your screen. Go outside for a walk,
    Find somebody real, for a real life talk.

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