Blackbird

I've recently come across a form of poetry called the sevenling. As its name implies,  it consists of 7 lines,  lines 1-3 contain 3 connected or contrasting statements or details,  as do lines 4-6. The 7th line is a narrative summary or punchline.  It doesn't have a fixed rhyme or metre but should have a rhythm of its own.  It's tight enough to make you careful with every word,  but not as restrictive as a haiku for example. 


It was coal black feathers,
Blazing orange beak,
Pale feet gripping the swaying cable. 

It was an acrobat riding the wind,
Alert, on guard, 
Gripped with an overriding hunger.

It was drawn to the feeders in the lilac tree. 


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  1. Ron.4 July 2021 at 10:22

    Great stuff! Sevenling has been one of my favorites for quite a while now. I post them often on my own blog. Here's one from a while back: https://wordpress.com/posts/rlavalette.wordpress.com?s=sevenling

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