To my husband, shopping alone

I've been learning about repetition of various types this week,  and have to write a poem of 15-20 lines using some of the ideas.  The last poem we had to read was 'To a Young Poet' by Mahmoud Darwish, which is full of sage advice on how to write poetry.  It's stuffed full of clever repetitions, not as repetitive or as everyday as what I've come up with, mind you. But I took the idea of writing a poem giving advice to a novice and combined that with the time Phil did the monthly shop alone, when my knee was first injured. He's actually much better at shopping than this gives him credit for - poetic licence! 

This is a draft - I've learnt that the course expects you to rewrite in line with comments from fellow students,  so they are not polished as much as usual.
 

Go to Lidl, go to Asda,
You won't find everything in one place. 
Go to Lidl for the basics, they're the cheapest, 
Go to Asda for the rest. 

You know what you need, that'll be easy,
I'm easy if you can't find the exact things for me.
Go with your gut, find the next best thing,
Get what you think is for the best.

I've written it all down, but give me a call
If my list is confusing, or anything at all.

Get some petrol, maybe get some flowers, 
Get something nice to have for lunch,
I'm sorry you'll have to unload the trolley
And load it all back into bags all alone.  

Take all the Bags for Life in the cupboard, 
Take more than you think you'll ever need,  
It's always more, it's never enough, 
But we really don’t need to buy any more. 

And remember - if you need to, give me a shout,
What you don't find we'll just have to go without.


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