Jazz Fantasy

 Day 1 of the NaPoWriMo challenge: write a poem inspired by this animated version of “Seductive Fantasy” by Sun Ra and his Arkestra. I love jazz, but this was off the scale dissonance,  and the animation followed suit! 

Fantajazzy

The band erupts into a cacophony
A symphony of disharmony, 
A whole new world, unfurled
Through fantastic animation, 
A landscape of alienation, blooming
With each mad syncopation,
Each punchy note blown, drummed, strummed,
Familiar yet strange - 
Flashes of beauty amongst the deranged.
Images fracture, coalesce,
This brave new world is our globe nevertheless,
Spun on a singer's single finger.
As I'm drawn into the scintillating third eye
The images, with the music, 
Begin to fade, and die. 


© Copyright 2021. Chris Auger. All Rights Reserved


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  1. Ron.1 April 2021 at 04:48

    Dissonance indeed; but dissonance RULES!
    Loved your response. thanks.

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